I really like what you've done. It's got your usual witty trademark! One comment though, you might want to reduce what Anonymous tells your main guy. I think there's a danger of there being too much exposition in his speeches. Try making Anonymous more enigmatic, say less and just hint at what's going on. Perhaps if you did this, the viewer would have the uncomfortable feeling that Anonymous is actually messing with the main guy's head...
Great stuff so far Chris.
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